Saturday, April 22, 2006

Why do YOU fear?

Ok found this..l.Actually stole this from my friend..She's a bit relecutant to share her poetry..Cause most of the time it aint good..;) Check it out..

Why do you fear?

I see you watching her
I see you pondering
What's the matter sir?
Why all this wondering?

What is it that you find so bewildering?
Is it her looks?
What is it that you find so intersting?
Is it the way she carries her books?

Perhaps it's her you admire
Perhaps it's her you hate
Is this why you call her a liar?
Is this why you haven't smiled as of late?

How threatening can she be?
Is it her bewitching eyes?
Oh,is it because she can see?
CAN she?Can she see through your lies?

Now I understand..
You fear her strength...
You fear her courage to stand
You've always watched her at length..

Amazing isn't she?
She can't be taken down
It's all the hidden she can see
That causes you to frown

You KNOW she's a force
No matter how you TRY
YOU can't deter her from her course
You FEEL her determination as she walks by




FEAR I likey..


Blogger A Daydreamer said...

Girl Power!! hehe

love it ;)

12:46 AM  
Blogger Sedna said...

Yep I likey too. Simple yet meaningful.

Bully your friend into blogging ;)

3:39 AM  
Blogger LaiaLy_q8 said...

very nice ^_^

10:16 AM  
Blogger ZiZoTiMe said...

BoooooooooooMB :)

11:36 AM  
Blogger jiji said...

y3ny wut this guy was intimidated by the girl whom he wanted?... and where does ur frined "assumin that she was a her" stand from all that?

12:17 PM  
Blogger LiLaCs said...

daydreamer--Let's take out those pom poms:D..Glad you liked it:D

Sedna--no comparison with your work Im humbled you like it:D I have converted from bully Im afriad..I can blackmail though..lOoOol

Laialy--Ty ty ty


Jiji--It's not about a guy who wanted her, its about the males in some girls family.. How some girls in society are still strong even though they are constantly being put down by the males..

1:44 PM  

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