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One at a time she unraveled. Slowly, surely, yet unpredictably.
One at a time. She fought with air relentlessly to no avil.
One at a time. She swam, with pure determination agianst the current.
She drowned, her breathing cut off, the beating of her heart stopped.
Only to be gasping for breath. Just one at a time.
Blinded, she forges ahead. Expectedly she stumbles.
One at a time. She falls, breaking bones.
Refusing to surrender to pain, she crawls.
One at time. She brusies egos.
Wet, without a breath, boneless she goes.
One at time. She goes.
6 Comments:
good for her :)
go feminist power!!
Ghasheem--Baby I agree..
i'll just lie to myself and say the poem's about me and teaching :p
kidding!
but amazing poem babes :***
sounds like a poem written for Jason voorhee's mom ! Just Kidding !
Blog Hopper says Hi !
Amazing poem!!
Whoever she is, she is strong!!
swairies--Im writing one just for you now ;) Next post for teachers..Bas:P
Happy wolf--**clueless** jason who? is she a stripper?:P Helo blog hopper;P
Sene--Hun this is every girl who gets what she wants..But has to be broken repeatedly to get it. And merci glad you liked it:D
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