Friday, June 01, 2007

Layer

One at a time she unraveled. Slowly, surely, yet unpredictably.
One at a time. She fought with air relentlessly to no avil.
One at a time. She swam, with pure determination agianst the current.
She drowned, her breathing cut off, the beating of her heart stopped.
Only to be gasping for breath. Just one at a time.
Blinded, she forges ahead. Expectedly she stumbles.
One at a time. She falls, breaking bones.
Refusing to surrender to pain, she crawls.
One at time. She brusies egos.
Wet, without a breath, boneless she goes.
One at time. She goes.

6 Comments:

Blogger Ghasheema said...

good for her :)

go feminist power!!

11:32 PM  
Blogger LiLaCs said...

Ghasheem--Baby I agree..

11:48 PM  
Blogger Swair. said...

i'll just lie to myself and say the poem's about me and teaching :p

kidding!

but amazing poem babes :***

12:14 AM  
Blogger Happy Wolf said...

sounds like a poem written for Jason voorhee's mom ! Just Kidding !
Blog Hopper says Hi !

5:33 AM  
Blogger Sene said...

Amazing poem!!
Whoever she is, she is strong!!

7:38 AM  
Blogger LiLaCs said...

swairies--Im writing one just for you now ;) Next post for teachers..Bas:P

Happy wolf--**clueless** jason who? is she a stripper?:P Helo blog hopper;P

Sene--Hun this is every girl who gets what she wants..But has to be broken repeatedly to get it. And merci glad you liked it:D

1:14 PM  

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