Friday, June 23, 2006

I dance on Glass..

Dedicated to N/S..Take it easy luv..


I dance, thinking of only your wants
I dance, wanting only your desires
I dance, caring for only your thoughts
I dance, obeying only your commands.

I dance on glass..

I dance, starved for only your encouragement
I dance, parched for only your pride
I dance, concerned for only your opinions
I dance, waiting for only your applause

I dance on glass..

I dance, sensing only your disattachment
I dance, feeling only your displeasure
I dance, hearing only your disappointment
I dance, seeing only your dissatisfaction

I dance on glass..

I dance, tears running down my face
I dance, heart laden with ache
I dance, chocked with pain
I dance, without a soul…

I dance on glass for you only father…

11 Comments:

Blogger Bella Color said...

wow!

Well said :)

6:49 PM  
Blogger ScarlO said...

You made me cry you witch :*

6:58 AM  
Blogger Sever said...

Hmmm...

What a week. Father`s one.

I guess, the post of Scarlo inspired you. Right?

Well done, girl!

12:41 PM  
Blogger Hussa-G said...

WOW, very nice my friend. I am lost for words.

3:28 PM  
Blogger Sedna said...

Hurts.

PS. gotta love the new template...
PPS. remind me to ask you something.

7:23 AM  
Blogger ZiZoTiMe said...

Who's the lucky guy? :P

Definitely not me hehehehehe ;)

10:37 AM  
Blogger LiLaCs said...

Bella Color--Im glad you liked it :D

Scarlie--liar..YOur a heartless bitch you dont have tear ducts luv ;)

Sever--Scarlie inspired me with a touch of current issues Im dealing with now..


Hussa--Im humbled that you liked it :D

Sedno--It hurts more when your in it..

P.s I know eh?

Zizi--**stares at zizo...Smack her forhead** **runs after zizo to choke the hell out of him** YOu didnt even finish reading it!!! You ass!! What does it say on the last line huh???**Checks her blood pressure**

IS it possible to be insulted by Zizo?? I never thought it would happen...
P.s.s ask away amour

6:02 PM  
Blogger ZiZoTiMe said...

LoooooooooooooooooL :P

10:37 AM  
Blogger LiLaCs said...

zizi--ur dead

5:00 PM  
Blogger Your Battlefield said...

mashallah..you've got a way with words that just pleads us to want more...so beautiful...i loved it :)the part that captured me the most...was "i dance, tears running down my face....i dance, without a soul..."

11:27 AM  
Blogger LiLaCs said...

your battelfield--i am humble and honoured that someone with your talents liked something from someone who neither cares nor can write anything poetic or remotely similar:P

9:59 PM  

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